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What should I do after my final secondary-school examinations? Because of many reasons, like the variety of apprenticeships and courses of study nowadays and the increasing number of the “G8”-pupils, who are certainly too young for such a profoundly decision, are many pupils faced with an unanswered decision. So they do a gap year. But is doing a gap year a really good decision?
If you’re doing a gap year, you’ll be one year far away. Away from your problems, your family, your friends – away from your life. Everybody of your social environment continues their lives – and when you come back they developed themselves further. They’ll get new friends; they’ll experience a lot of things – without you. You’ll be back – but everything changed. So the risk is high when you go away for a whole year. In the last resort you come home and you’re alone.
But everyone knows the saying: No risk no fun. There are so many advantages for doing a gap year. Sure, your friends at home will experience a lot of things – but they can’t hold a candle to the things, which you experience abroad. In a gap year you are almost complete shift of yourself. You learn to be self-contained and how to handle in a country with a complete different culture and language. There you haven’t a mother who decides what clothes you wear or something else – you have to decide e v e r y t h i n g on your own. But winning maturity isn’t the only good thing of a gap year. If you apply for a job after doing a meaningful gap year and write it on your CV – you would happily be employed of many firms.
All in all, is doing a gap year the best solution if you don’t know what you should do after your exams. Of course you have to want it really – and don’t do it only for a good CV. In the era of “Skype”, “Facebook” and Co., you can share your experience with your friends – and the right friends will like you, even you are one year away.
“Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn’t do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover” – Mark Twain




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